Monday 26 November 2018

SLJ paying it foreword

if could time travel to  1930s. and give a gift I will give them a laptop so they can figure out how to reinvent a laptop  or a tv .because it will be interesting to know  what  will happen  in the future


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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 November 2018 at 12:32

    Hi Erica,I really like what you would give them (you don't have to do it) but can you maybe put a full stop at the end of your writing and instead a full stop in the middle of 1930 and then it would look much better.

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  2. Anonymous3 December 2018 at 10:08

    Hi Erica Its Tamisha
    I really like your SLJ writing. It made me think of the time i had to do that activity.
    Maybe next time you could reread your writing and make sure it makes sense.

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