Hi Erica its Tamisha I really liked how you told us the different ingredients we need. It made me think of the time i learnt to make jelly. Maybe next time you could tell us if you enjoyed making it or not.
Hi Erica it's Jahnera. I really liked how you added photos and told us steps it was help full but maybe just check your spelling and maybe edit it because i don't understand what ferst is. Maybe you could tell us what it was like making it was it easy hard or boring also you could tell us more about how it tasted Kind regards Jahnera
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Hi Erica its Tamisha
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you told us the different ingredients we need. It made me think of the time i learnt to make jelly. Maybe next time you could tell us if you enjoyed making it or not.
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Hi Erica
ReplyDeleteit's Jahnera.
I really liked how you added photos and told us steps it was help full but maybe just check your spelling and maybe edit it because i don't understand what ferst is. Maybe you could tell us what it was like making it was it easy hard or boring also you could tell us more about how it tasted
Kind regards Jahnera